Description

When I was young I didn't think so much abut how is my mum, but now that I've grown up I know how strong she is. When I was five, she needed to make a lot of choices and our lifes changed, but she just faced the problems. he's a happy person and she's always ready to do what she has to do. I used to see her as a serious person because she's my mum, but now I know how she really is, and I'm proud of her.

Peer response

Dear Jennifer, I know we haven't much time to write the paragraph, but from what I could read I was able to see the colossal love and  gratitude  you have for your mother.

It is great to see that young people rely on their mothers, if I'm honest I can't say that much about me but, reading what you said about your mum it gives a bit of nostalgy and a bit of heat in my heart, and I hope it makes you feel the same. 

I can't really tell what's wrong or what's right. Structure is good words are perfectly chosen you wrote from the heart so you did your best in such a short time. 

So, I hope next time I make a peer response for you we all have more time to write so I can see all your heart can describe through your hands.